Kinda like this (if that even helps I’m not good at drawing on my phone
Bobbith_Jayus-Kamuni on
overall the shape of the head does seem a bit “clunky”, and kind of sharp edged, but before I can fully answer, what was used to make this, digital? markers?
AwesomeGuyAlpha on
dont know nothing about art but this looks amazing, it feels like the character suddenly saw something at the edge of her vision and is instantly turning to save herself from it, the problem looks like that the body seems too static and doesn’t seem like it was moving with the body during her sudden turn
Murky-Square4364 on
I like it. It feels like she’s turning her head viciously, which I think is what you were going for unless I’m mistaken.
J_0_0_N on
This is better than anything I could do
But I think the problem is the forehead. I think it’s to small or to “far back” if you know what I mean
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I think it becausu her forehead should be over her left eye and then the cheek should be too.
https://preview.redd.it/cjppp78uj5ed1.png?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=c8ae20e018db2b1be505bc4965aa0955ad7880f2
Kinda like this (if that even helps I’m not good at drawing on my phone
overall the shape of the head does seem a bit “clunky”, and kind of sharp edged, but before I can fully answer, what was used to make this, digital? markers?
dont know nothing about art but this looks amazing, it feels like the character suddenly saw something at the edge of her vision and is instantly turning to save herself from it, the problem looks like that the body seems too static and doesn’t seem like it was moving with the body during her sudden turn
I like it. It feels like she’s turning her head viciously, which I think is what you were going for unless I’m mistaken.
This is better than anything I could do
But I think the problem is the forehead. I think it’s to small or to “far back” if you know what I mean