What do y’all think?

Please critique me with helpful tips please… And be nice okay, this is my first few times doing digital art using my phone and a finger cause my tablet s pen is boku no broken🥲 anyways this character i made name is Phen Lin. Pronounce as Fern Leen. She's a nice girl who loves fashion and hanging out with friends! She's not so popular but she is a social butterfly and she has a best friend who's very shy who she loves very much💖 a lot of people wants to date her but she rejects all them as she only dates people who can nice towards her best friend🥺💖💖💖 lol i made up this story just now for fun but yeah.